The lune is also known as the American Haiku.
After much experimentation, he settled on a syllable, self-contained poem that has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line. Unlike haiku, there are no other rules.
No need for a cutting word. Rhymes are fine; subject matter is open.
While there are less syllables to use, this form has a little more freedom. There is a variant lune created by poet Here Collom. His form is also a self-contained tercet, but his poem is word-based not syllable-based and has the structure of 3 words in the first line, 5 words in the second line and 3 words in the final line.
I spied on balmy night on the beach.
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De Jackson "Spill" made my heart ache. I wrote these last evening but could not post due to a passing storm…. AM Trumble…i enjoyed your submissions. My attempt at a Collom Lune. I did remove the "the"…. I took it on the 4th.
1 A lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It has only three lines. It is similar to a haiku. A haiku has three lines, and it follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern. Claude Debussy: Claude Debussy () and the Sonata for Cello and Piano (; originally titled Pierrot fâché avec la lune [“Pierrot Vexed by the Moon”]). A poetry writing prompt. Write a Lune. A Lune is a condensed haiku. It has syllables. Write a writing prompt for this contest. Write a Lune - A three-line poem of 13 syllables. The first and last lines contain 5 syllables each, and the center line only 3.
And of course now the date should not appear in the title. Apparently today my ink is also not enough to write a proper poem.
The lune is also known as the American Haiku. It was first created by the poet Robert Kelly (truly a great poet) and was a result of Kelly's frustration wi. Write a Lune? What’s a Lune? It’s a poem with just three lines that follows a specific syllable count. It has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the. Poetry Forms Index «Swinburne Octain How to Write a Collom Lune. Lune authorship permits. words, not syllables be counted. three, five, three. Rhyming Kelly Lune. Achille-Claude Debussy (French: was to write of him: Clair de Lune. His String Quartet in G minor (). Clair De Lune by Claude Debussy song meaning, lyric interpretation, video and chart position.
Thanks for this exercise, Robert. Hope to catch up on reading tonight.
OK, I was using as well. Someone I will learn to count. First opportunity today to try out each of the two lune forms. All here are terrific. Boy, I was having trouble with the Kelly lune, but I think I have I strong attempt—but it definitely has a lot of gravity, similar to my Collum lune. You must be logged in to post a comment.